Using DRAFT in our writing

LI:To use DRAFT to check our sentences. 

This is the original sentence

why-as the sun rose,she twirled slowly through the forest trying to find her prince charming.  

This is the DRAFT sentence

why-as the sun rose,she twirled slowly through the forest trying to find her prince charming.

Victoria and I try to make up a original sentences after that we tried to stretching our sentences to make it sound better.

What In The World Am I? - Cecillia & June

Here is what June and I did for our homework, for this we had to use the five W's to complete this and find out what is this place.We had to find what the place was called and so we used the google map to figure out where it was in the world.

Where In The World Am I - Cecillia & Victoria.

Victoria and I had to look up about Sydney Opera house for our homework it was so interesting about how we used the 5 w's to find out about this place. For this we had to form into race buddy to create this. The thing that I most enjoyed was that I was being able to use my research skills. 

Stretching Sentences

Victoria and I display a story that we had to make up so our one was (She danced) so we started of with who and then we went along with the rest of the w's. My partner and I have put our skills to make this sentence powerful.

prototec basic facts

 I was learning to recall my basic facts for the assessments this week what I need to work on is my subtractions and to improve my maths moving up a level and focusing  on my learning  and to keep trying.