LI:To use DRAFT to check our sentences.
This is the original sentence
why-as the sun rose,she twirled slowly through the forest trying to find her prince charming.
This is the DRAFT sentence
why-as the sun rose,she twirled slowly through the forest trying to find her prince charming.
Victoria and I try to make up a original sentences after that we tried to stretching our sentences to make it sound better.
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