So what I had to do here is that I had to continue the sentences so what my story is about is that a girl name Cecillia gets called from the spectator and that she gets a 3 pointer to see the silver ferns and so she got it in. Next day she tells her friends Victoria,Ana and Mere. Then Maria Tutaia tells them "When you play netball the there are going to be ups and downs but just believe that you're going to FINISH"
Wow, Cecillia, this is a stunning story. It is thoughtful, creative, entertaining and detailed. Well done. You have really embraced this activity and given it your very best effort, just like the young girl in the story (also named Cecillia!) who wanted to become a Silver Fern. I liked your story so much that I read it to my partner and to my son (Aronui). Aronui said that his favourite part was the final sentence when Maria Tutaia told the players that there are going to be ups and down but you just have to believe that you will finish. That is such an important message and one that we can all relate to, whether we play netball or not.
ReplyDeleteGood on you, Cecillia, for crafting a fabulous story. I hope that you continue with your amazing blogging and, despite the ups and downs, finish the whole Winter Learning Journey programme!
Cheers, Rachel :)
Hi Rachel,
DeleteThank you! I really appreciate the time you have comment on my blog and I was so surprise when you read to your partner and Son Aronui. That is really true what you said "Whether we play netball or not" Because many of us here doesn't know how to play netball but want to play there will be some to help them follow there dream.
It is my pleasure! I just read Daniel's comment and he mentioned that you might want to be a netball player when you are older. Is that true? It's a great goal. Like Daniel, I believe that you can achieve any goal that you set your mind to!
DeleteCheers, Rachel :)
Hi Rachel,
DeleteIt is true what Daniel said I want to become a netball player so I can make my parents proud of me and show that I followed my dreams and I became a Silver Fern Player.
Cecillia
Hi Cecillia
ReplyDeleteI think that you wrote a incredible story that was long and interesting. Like your son Rachel my favorite part was at the end. Judging by the story, I assume you want to be a netball player when you are older. Well, keep up the good work and you will achieve your goal.
Daniel